I always imagine that a flash video maker that doesn't make any films for a year or two has probably stopped making them, so this is a nice surprise to finally see a new film from you and made me think that good flash films take longer to create.
Anyway the film was superb. I'm sure everyone is surprised at how well the stick figures looked in this movie, they've actually looked like they improved somehow from the other movies. Maybe it was just the focus on Private Ray which made it somehow feel more real.
Very tension filled, also a nice climax and cliffhanger at end. Good film!
Thanks man. :)
I'll just get right to this,
The storyline: None obviously, just a bunch of dancing that was unfunny, or creative in any way. A storyline is something you should actully include in any basic flash....but this isn't a flash so wtf is it doing here?
Graphics/video: Umm...its you lip synching to a song... what more information could I possibly give about this other than the fact it was choppy?
Sound/Music: No sound, and one song. I thought the song before this was odd but I could withstand listening to a few minutes of it, but when it's crossed with some 12 year old trying to be famous and acting like a dork, it just won't work.
Other: This is Newgrounds, a FLASH WEBSITE! Videos like this belong to YOU TUBE, don't confuse the two.
Suggestions: Yes I watched the whole thing and was annoyed entirely from the fact you dancing like a dork to a blastphomas song. What you should do, delete this and post it on youtube since this isn't flash, put some actual effort in your flashes/videos, don't show your face in a video ever again. I felt I was watching some sort of cheap kitty porn throughout the movie.
How you could improve this: You can't really, but in FLASHES that you create on NEWGROUNDS instead of VIDEOS that should be posted on YOUTUBE, you should
a)Put some effort into the flash
b)give it a storyline
c) more sounds/effects/songs
d)make a decent script
e) actully work a bit on the graphics
Oh and also, don't be another Numa Numa wannabe, there will be no more popularity coming from videos like that anymore. That was a long time ago when people thought the internet was bs and well....look at it now!
Overall: a frustrating song, and aggrivating character, absolutely no plot, a cliche.
P.s.: If your going to make a video, it still needs a plot even for a music video, and it needs to be LESS OF AN AGGRIVATING CLICHE.
If your going to make a video, give it a plot, good characters, a fine setting, great sounds and effects, and GOOD ACTORS.
Oh and submit it to YOUTUBE NOT NEWGROUNDS.
I'll say it once more,
Newgrounds is a Flash Site
Youtube is a Video Site
You are at the WRONG SITE
Great Comedy Flash!
To start off, this flash had a nice plot that fitted nicely together. The characters we got to know some of them, but not all, but hey this is just a flash and this is not a flash series(unless your making the: Reverse Goatee XD). The art and animation was very good for my standards. I felt like the characters really felt real and had personalities that fitted them.
I felt the voice overs were very well done and were not out of synch. Also, overall this movie was a great comedic experince from a flash for me. I'm pretty sure this would impress many people who want to see a funny flash animation.
It's in my favorites too :D
Actually, it sort of IS a series, it just hasn't been around long enough for a series page or anything. This is episode 4, the first three being "Runesuck", "Don't wake Robby", and "Dog Daze of Boredom". "Day of the Devil" and "Pop a Cap" fit in there as well, but aren't technically episodes. Just so you know. Thanks for the review!
Great halloween flash!
This a great edition to the halloween collection. It's pretty much all about halloween anyway. I think this film deserves some great praise for it's good graphics and of course the perfect song to go with it. Awsome job!
I think it's a pretty good short flash. The animation was great, of course, and it seemed to build a bit of tension. Nice job! And I bet that guy is pretty screwed right now XD
The Girl Got Spunk
Yes I cannot wait till episode one which I know is coming out...soon I hope :D. I love the graphics which are really superb and outstanding to newgrounds. I know it's just a teaser,but this has got to be one of the best flashes i've ever seen. Great Job, it the best teaser for a flash...Ever.
A deep movie
This movie really goes deep and sends a message to the watchers about the lonliness the person felt in there. The graphics were the right kind for this kind of movie, which was outstanding.
But the message is the best part of this movie.
Sorry about your friend too.
Yeah it had quite a lot of funny parts in it, but it was pretty short. I would've liked it if it was a bit longer and a bit more story to it, but this was still pretty funny.
Is Exactly what I said when it finished.
The Animation: Great
Your movie: Eye boggling, jaw dropping awsomeness.
It's good to see an amazing movie like this once in a while. Which is exactly why this gets a
O M F G
This was amazing. I would've already gave the intro a 5 but then it got even better and better and freaking awsome. This is past the threshold of a great flash, because of its amazing graphics, dramatic scenes that made me say omfg, and of course violence. I just really loved the dramatic scenes cause I dont say omfg outloud often at movies and I did during 3 parts of this movie. Lets just say another fan loves you movies and can't wait.
I give this a 10/10
+ 99 >.>
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